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Business Email [REVISED]



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[REVISION]



Virna

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6 comments:

  1. Unknown3/02/2016 5:41 AM

    Surely, that is a great e-mail. Great choices word, and good tune.

    I really like it. You're a good writer, girl. (y)

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  2. Unknown3/02/2016 6:28 AM

    in my opinion, You had better do not use the contraction, but overall your email is good.

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    1. Unknown3/02/2016 6:44 AM

      i think it's okay to use contractions, since it is an email not a formal letter

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    2. Virna3/02/2016 7:37 AM

      Guys, i'm honestly dont know what contractions is T.T can someone please explain it to me?

      Delete
  3. Unknown3/02/2016 9:08 AM

    Great example business email, good job!😊

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  4. Devi Hermasari3/02/2016 11:52 AM

    You'd rather change in aim to aimed (and simplify the previous part of the sentence.
    Divide the body into 3 parts.
    Looking forward to HEARING from you

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