My task this week is giving a reply to my friend's complaint letter. I pick Tomi's, and there it is. Well, I found it hard to respond to his topic, so please give me any advice to make my letter better. Thank you :)
-- Letter of Protest --
Krangkungan 56511
Magelang
26/3/2016
Condong Catur City Council
Delima St,
Sleman
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to complain about city council plan to build a supermarket next to my house.
I think that plan is good for economic use as around my house there are many home industries that need place to promote and also offer their product to consumers. However, you have to consider where you will build the supermarket, because if you still want to build in there – next to my house- it will be worse the CongCat Residence’s life.
Firstly, place that selected to build the supermarket is the only one green area in that area. In addition, it has direct effect to The air pollution.
Secondly, there is river around that place. I and residence society afraid the rubbishes of supermarket activity make the river to be dirty.
Also near that place there is traditional market. Supermarket has bad effects for trading activity in there.
I realize that build the supermarket has advantage and disadvantage. I wish you consider about both. In addition, choose the right place is crucial decision that have to make with consider other aspects.
I would like the place is moved to another place for better life in CongCat Residence.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
xoxo
Cahyo T. Prakoso
-- Response --
Condong Catur City Council
Sleman
30/3/2016
30/3/2016
Krangkungan 56511
Magelang
30/3/2016
Thank you for your letter expressing your dissapointment.
Unfortunately, we could not do anything about it. We had done a research and we concluded that it is the best place to built a supermarket.
We have planned to make a city park and waste banishment to prevent the pollution. In the other side, trading activity in traditional market is, of course, out of our control. We would pass your letter about traditional market to Department of Economy.
We have planned to make a city park and waste banishment to prevent the pollution. In the other side, trading activity in traditional market is, of course, out of our control. We would pass your letter about traditional market to Department of Economy.
We look forward to seeing you again.
Yours sincerely,
Virna Oktavenia
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[REVISION]
Condong Catur City Council
Sleman
30/3/2016
30/3/2016
Krangkungan 56511
Magelang
30/3/2016
Thank you for your letter expressing your disappointment.
Unfortunately, we could not do anything about it. We had done a survey and concluded that it is the best place to built a new supermarket.
We have planned to make a city park and a waste banishment to prevent the pollution. However, trading activity in traditional market is out of our control. We would pass your letter about traditional market to Department of Economy.
We have planned to make a city park and a waste banishment to prevent the pollution. However, trading activity in traditional market is out of our control. We would pass your letter about traditional market to Department of Economy.
We look forward to seeing you again.
Yours sincerely,
Virna Oktavenia
You have a good response with polite language. Nice!
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