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Letter of Protest or Complaint [REVISED]

6/2 Blackwood St,
Lewis A.C.T
05/01/2016


Production Manager,
Riverside Manufacturer,
Chapel Street,
London


Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about your product.

I bought a toy truck from your shop a week ago, and it seems your toy is not safe for children. My niece’s finger had to be stitched after it was trapped between the wheels and the body of the truck.

In my opinion, there are some parts of your toy truck which are not cut neatly. Please evaluate the production and the design of your toy truck.

I look forward to hearing from you.


Yours faithfully,

xoxo

Virna Oktavenia




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[REVISION]


6/2 Blackwood St,
Lewis A.C.T
05/01/2016


Production Manager,
Riverside Manufacturer,
Chapel Street,
London


Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to complain about your product.

I bought a toy truck from your shop a week ago, and it seems your toy is not safe for children. My niece’s finger had to be stitched after it was trapped between the wheels and the body of the truck.

In my opinion, some parts of your toy truck are not cut neatly. Please evaluate the production and the design of your toy truck.

I look forward to hearing from you.


Yours faithfully,

xoxo



Virna Oktavenia

Virna

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3 comments:

  1. Unknown3/29/2016 9:52 PM

    Nice letter, with good content and language usage.
    I don't think that somebody will choose this situation :3

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  2. Unknown3/30/2016 7:55 AM

    Good post vir.
    I like your way to make it not like a complaint letter. "cut neatly" it's a good choice word.

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  3. Unknown3/30/2016 10:46 AM

    I think it's better if you remove 'this letter' in sentence 'I am writing this letter to complain' to make it more effective. But over all it's really good letter!😊

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